You could improve your essay by making sure you include all parts of TAG in your thesis. You started good but forgot to add the genre and the tone word.
One strength you had was your evidence and analyzes. You included evidence that properly supported your statement and elaborated with your analysis
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ReplyDeleteYou could improve your essay by making sure you include all parts of TAG in your thesis. You started good but forgot to add the genre and the tone word.
One strength you had was your evidence and analyzes. You included evidence that properly supported your statement and elaborated with your analysis
-KG.